Below is the challenge results for [10/30/2005].


Challenge: [Write a short story or poem about a relationship, good or bad, between siblings]



Sweet Revenge
You are what you did not wish to be
Dat apple don't fall far from dat tree.
Me? I ‘m free from such troubles.
No such worries for me.
No genetic connections to you
Or her nor even he.
I stand and I laugh at the quagmire…
Through which you have to struggle
Ne’er an inch farther
Than when you began the struggle.
We were younger then,and you
Swore you would not,
Repeat the mistakes
Of the past.
You would not be
THAT man.
You would
Be different…
THAT didn't last
Now I stand here,
drink in Hand having read your threats
To me…
having done my
Dance of joy ,
that there is no
link to thee!
You alone carry the code
For the cold, cold heart
And the cruel nature that
Turns on its young.
That combination is one
That is dangerous to deal with
And I sleep with one eye open
But with a smile upon my face
And a dance in my heart.
For you are what you
Did not wish to be.
You, are your father.
My revenge is complete.

© Kimberly C. Beach




Brother's ultimate betrayal

All I wanted was to like you
You were flesh of my flesh
A younger sibling that I was to watch over
But you had access to things I did not
You were closer to everyone
While I chose to keep my distance, I was determine to
fight a war that was between our mothers'
Finally I had seen that I was only harming myself
psychologically
I was mending fences and healing myself
I was reaching out to our father...
But your mother did not want that
You, her seed, would always be considered better... in her eyes
So, she devised a plan so evil, Cain looks like a saint
So now my life is crumbling
My soul is weak
Grandmother states prayer can change things
Let go and let God she adds
But I want to let it all go
All because of my brother's ultimate betrayal...
© Genta Hughes




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