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Challenge: [Write a poem or short story using the phrase Ice water in her veins.]



You left her alone with a sorrow heart and mind
All she wanted to do is leave all dreams behind
Oh there were times when she couldn't face love
During times of uncertain storms and pain


She was my very best friend time and time again
But all you've done is left her in flushing pain
She thought that you'll love her forever and yet
You let love freeze like ice water in her veins


Why do you have to treat a friend this way
She loved you with all her heart until today
But what's the reason you let her cry
Under the rain, it ended with your goodbye


You let love freeze like ice water in her veins
Her life was all but promises and pains
She thought that you're the rainbow in the skies
Yet you've let love go, into a world of sweet lies.
Written By: Anny




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